I learned you really like to go camping as a family. My family and yours is different because the women in my family never wanted to go camping, that was the men's get away. I really liked that your pictures were consistent through the story. You may want to break the words up onto different slides for the longer phrases.
One thing I learned about you is that you and your brother seem to be competitive! Something that we have in common is that I also love to sit around a campfire and share stories with some of my friends. It is probably one of my favorite things to do! The best thing about your digital story is how the pictures correspond so well with the words. If I were to change anything, I would consider making it a little longer. It was a great video!
I learned that you like to go camping, which is similar to me and my family! I loved how the pictures went along with the story, which made it easier to picture what you were telling us. One thing I would change would be to add less words on some of the slides. Other than that, you did great!! :)
I learned that you and your whole family love to go camping. This is similar to me and my family. Your pictures went great with the words. One thing I would change is slowing down the last slide so it can be read, it's a little fast. Good job!
I learned that you and your family like to go camping and from the pictures it appeared that you had a permanent camp site. My family also likes to go camping. We have campers and cabin along Holly River where we several times a year. The best thing about your video is the pictures. I really liked seeing the pictures of you family camping because it beings back my own memories. One thing I would change or adjust is the speed or motion of the slides. Some of the words were hard to read because the changed or moved to fast. Great job!!
One thing I learned about you is that you love the outdoors. Your family is similar/different than mine because we love to go camping as well. The best thing about your digital story is the layout is unique. I haven’t seen one layed out like yours yet. One think you could change is it could be a little longer..
One thing I learned about you is that you are from a small town. I see this as something that is similar to my family because I'm also from a small town. The best thing about your digital story is that you matched your comments with your pictures perfectly. The only thing I would change is maybe add a few more pictures.
One thing I learned about you is that you were on the FSU swim team, so cool. Your family is similar/different than mine because of the competitiveness between you and your brother. The best thing about your digital story is the pictures and the music. So fun! One think you could change is the speed of your slides.
One thing I learned about you is... you play a lot of basketball Your family is similar/different than mine because...different 'cause it looks like your family has a lot of boys The best thing about your digital story is...I like the music One think you could change is...... split up the lines on the slides, I couldn't even finish reading the last one
One thing I learned about you is that you love to go camping! This is different from me because I'm not much of an 'outdoorsy' girl. The best thing about your digital story is the pictures and words flow well together and the music also conveys your story well. One thing I would change is the speed of the slides. I would consider slowing them down a little, especially the last slide. Great job though :)
I am 23 years old, I am a former fairmont state swimmer and happy to be studying education in west Virginia.I am very energetic and enjoy working with kids.
I learned you really like to go camping as a family. My family and yours is different because the women in my family never wanted to go camping, that was the men's get away. I really liked that your pictures were consistent through the story. You may want to break the words up onto different slides for the longer phrases.
ReplyDeleteOne thing I learned about you is that you and your brother seem to be competitive! Something that we have in common is that I also love to sit around a campfire and share stories with some of my friends. It is probably one of my favorite things to do! The best thing about your digital story is how the pictures correspond so well with the words. If I were to change anything, I would consider making it a little longer. It was a great video!
ReplyDeleteI learned that you like to go camping, which is similar to me and my family! I loved how the pictures went along with the story, which made it easier to picture what you were telling us. One thing I would change would be to add less words on some of the slides. Other than that, you did great!! :)
ReplyDeleteI learned that you and your whole family love to go camping. This is similar to me and my family. Your pictures went great with the words. One thing I would change is slowing down the last slide so it can be read, it's a little fast. Good job!
ReplyDeleteI learned that you and your family like to go camping and from the pictures it appeared that you had a permanent camp site. My family also likes to go camping. We have campers and cabin along Holly River where we several times a year. The best thing about your video is the pictures. I really liked seeing the pictures of you family camping because it beings back my own memories. One thing I would change or adjust is the speed or motion of the slides. Some of the words were hard to read because the changed or moved to fast. Great job!!
ReplyDeleteOne thing I learned about you is that you love the outdoors.
ReplyDeleteYour family is similar/different than mine because we love to go camping as well.
The best thing about your digital story is the layout is unique. I haven’t seen one layed out like yours yet.
One think you could change is it could be a little longer..
One thing I learned about you is that you are from a small town. I see this as something that is similar to my family because I'm also from a small town. The best thing about your digital story is that you matched your comments with your pictures perfectly. The only thing I would change is maybe add a few more pictures.
ReplyDeleteOne thing I learned about you is that you were on the FSU swim team, so cool.
ReplyDeleteYour family is similar/different than mine because of the competitiveness between you and your brother.
The best thing about your digital story is the pictures and the music. So fun!
One think you could change is the speed of your slides.
One thing I learned about you is... you play a lot of basketball
ReplyDeleteYour family is similar/different than mine because...different 'cause it looks like your family has a lot of boys
The best thing about your digital story is...I like the music
One think you could change is...... split up the lines on the slides, I couldn't even finish reading the last one
One thing I learned about you is that you love to go camping! This is different from me because I'm not much of an 'outdoorsy' girl. The best thing about your digital story is the pictures and words flow well together and the music also conveys your story well. One thing I would change is the speed of the slides. I would consider slowing them down a little, especially the last slide. Great job though :)
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